...I thought its over ...I thought it was impossible to win ...and i made a miracle... After thinking my career as a script writer was gone...
I, like usual was the first who enters the class. I place my bag on my table, and lay on it... closing my eyes... Thinking how screwed up my drama would get.. I soon felt asleep... I had a wierd dream...... That i couldnt recall... When i woke up... I was surprised...... They were all practicing... I put on my specs, and watch them rehearse. Each of them done their part... And i was glad. Soon, the bell rang, we head down to the hall, And was expecting to meet other classes. We were the first to arrive, We faced each other and i told everyone
Rei: "look... forget about yesterday... ...From the very beginning, we did not have enough time. But, all we need to is beat Nemesu! Penaga is surely out, They dont even have a script. So... Its "Now Or Never" !!! Lets do this Ramin!!!"
5 Ramin: "Yeah!!!"
I went ahead and test my music, it was fine. And i kept the cd in my bag. The first one acting was 5 Nemesu... I watched it nervously, mumbing to myself words like. "Will it be better than my drama..." "They are a better class than me... Of course They will win my script..."
It soon began... .....................Oh My God ............................Its LAME man!!! What the hell!!! So boring!!! Nothing funny at all!!! Is this what they have to offer!? ...Okay, the ending was a little funny ...but ...just a little... Soon... It was my turn... our turn...
I went backstage for some final opinions, and with one last "good luck" i went into the music room, and begin the music.
It soon ended............................................ With positive results~!!! Everyone in the hall laughed!!! Even the judges!!! My music fitted the scenes perfectly!!! And their acting was really kinda good!!! I was satisfied...... Really satisfied...
It was soon Penaga's turn... I watch them below the stage, having high hopes towards my drama. as expected............ Their drama was broken... Its just simply about a good boy with his friends that take drugs(the most common story). They went into a night club and was caught, because of the good boy. The good boy then freed them(didnt know how they did it) And the boy lectured them........................... BORING!!! We are winning~!!!
We went back to class, and took some photos. I was not among them though... Im just the director... I went back to my table and lay on the table... People began talking if our drama would win. The only flaw in my drama was it was too long(over the 12min timelimit). But some students kept saying that Nemesu was going to win. It really made me sad, the way they said it... Until i felt i was going to cry...
During rehat... I walk to the basketball court like usual... But instead of sitting down... i slept on the seat... closing my eyes... looking at the blue clouds... Thinking... Why did i put so much effort in it for... Not a single person thanked me for completing the script for them... I shut my feelings and tried to sleep... My act-mature friend came to me... hitting my shoulder, calling me up... I asked him to go away... He refused... And i finally asked him to F-Off............... Gomen... He then walk away... I close my eyes again......
Rehat was over... I went back to my class... She was not in the canteen today... Wanted to talk to her today but......... I met my friend from my class(not acting). He........... was the first one who said "good job man" to me... It boosted my spirit a bit... But still.. It wasnt enough......
Time passed by... It soon was English... She asked the one who acted in the drama to stand up... I didnt... I dont know why... I felt that i wasnt in the drama... Although i was the one who wrote it... I continued with my homework... ignoring what was happening...
While she was teaching, news came in... It looks like my class won............. We won....? .............WE WON!!! ...The actors got up from their seat, dancing around... I sat on my seat... Continuing my work... Suddenly.
Pn Tan: "Everyone, please say thank you to our drama script writer, Peng Shian."
I was surprised, Or i think shocked. I faced the class that was facing me.
5 Ramin: "Thank you, Peng Shian~!!!"
I felt that tears fell of my cheek... I got up from my seat... Bowing towards my class... Saying
Rei: "THANK YOU!!! THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!"
They all clapped, as i lift my head up again. I never felt that happy in my life before... It was the first time that the whole class were facing me... clapping their hands... That feeling... I will never forget it... It was nothing that i felt before... Glory... Respect... Honor... It was all there...
Pn Tan: "Peng Shian, You really have the potencial to become a script writer(Movie Director). Will you be doing that"
Rei: ...Im not sure ...i have always planned To become a chef..."
Pn Tan: "The judges told me your story was touching although the act was kinda out. They never read such a story before, it was great."
Rei: "Thank You teacher!!!"
And... That is what happen, during my short journey as a Drama script writer... ...I hope i will have another chance to do this drama again... And if i do have a second time... Ill make it perfect!!! ...Lastly ...Arigato Ne-san ...If it wasnt for you... I dont think i could even have finished this script... Arigato... Hontoni Arigato...
I, like usual was the first who enters the class. I place my bag on my table, and lay on it... closing my eyes... Thinking how screwed up my drama would get.. I soon felt asleep... I had a wierd dream...... That i couldnt recall... When i woke up... I was surprised...... They were all practicing... I put on my specs, and watch them rehearse. Each of them done their part... And i was glad. Soon, the bell rang, we head down to the hall, And was expecting to meet other classes. We were the first to arrive, We faced each other and i told everyone
Rei: "look... forget about yesterday... ...From the very beginning, we did not have enough time. But, all we need to is beat Nemesu! Penaga is surely out, They dont even have a script. So... Its "Now Or Never" !!! Lets do this Ramin!!!"
5 Ramin: "Yeah!!!"
I went ahead and test my music, it was fine. And i kept the cd in my bag. The first one acting was 5 Nemesu... I watched it nervously, mumbing to myself words like. "Will it be better than my drama..." "They are a better class than me... Of course They will win my script..."
It soon began... .....................Oh My God ............................Its LAME man!!! What the hell!!! So boring!!! Nothing funny at all!!! Is this what they have to offer!? ...Okay, the ending was a little funny ...but ...just a little... Soon... It was my turn... our turn...
I went backstage for some final opinions, and with one last "good luck" i went into the music room, and begin the music.
It soon ended............................................ With positive results~!!! Everyone in the hall laughed!!! Even the judges!!! My music fitted the scenes perfectly!!! And their acting was really kinda good!!! I was satisfied...... Really satisfied...
It was soon Penaga's turn... I watch them below the stage, having high hopes towards my drama. as expected............ Their drama was broken... Its just simply about a good boy with his friends that take drugs(the most common story). They went into a night club and was caught, because of the good boy. The good boy then freed them(didnt know how they did it) And the boy lectured them........................... BORING!!! We are winning~!!!
We went back to class, and took some photos. I was not among them though... Im just the director... I went back to my table and lay on the table... People began talking if our drama would win. The only flaw in my drama was it was too long(over the 12min timelimit). But some students kept saying that Nemesu was going to win. It really made me sad, the way they said it... Until i felt i was going to cry...
During rehat... I walk to the basketball court like usual... But instead of sitting down... i slept on the seat... closing my eyes... looking at the blue clouds... Thinking... Why did i put so much effort in it for... Not a single person thanked me for completing the script for them... I shut my feelings and tried to sleep... My act-mature friend came to me... hitting my shoulder, calling me up... I asked him to go away... He refused... And i finally asked him to F-Off............... Gomen... He then walk away... I close my eyes again......
Rehat was over... I went back to my class... She was not in the canteen today... Wanted to talk to her today but......... I met my friend from my class(not acting). He........... was the first one who said "good job man" to me... It boosted my spirit a bit... But still.. It wasnt enough......
Time passed by... It soon was English... She asked the one who acted in the drama to stand up... I didnt... I dont know why... I felt that i wasnt in the drama... Although i was the one who wrote it... I continued with my homework... ignoring what was happening...
While she was teaching, news came in... It looks like my class won............. We won....? .............WE WON!!! ...The actors got up from their seat, dancing around... I sat on my seat... Continuing my work... Suddenly.
Pn Tan: "Everyone, please say thank you to our drama script writer, Peng Shian."
I was surprised, Or i think shocked. I faced the class that was facing me.
5 Ramin: "Thank you, Peng Shian~!!!"
I felt that tears fell of my cheek... I got up from my seat... Bowing towards my class... Saying
Rei: "THANK YOU!!! THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!"
They all clapped, as i lift my head up again. I never felt that happy in my life before... It was the first time that the whole class were facing me... clapping their hands... That feeling... I will never forget it... It was nothing that i felt before... Glory... Respect... Honor... It was all there...
Pn Tan: "Peng Shian, You really have the potencial to become a script writer(Movie Director). Will you be doing that"
Rei: ...Im not sure ...i have always planned To become a chef..."
Pn Tan: "The judges told me your story was touching although the act was kinda out. They never read such a story before, it was great."
Rei: "Thank You teacher!!!"
And... That is what happen, during my short journey as a Drama script writer... ...I hope i will have another chance to do this drama again... And if i do have a second time... Ill make it perfect!!! ...Lastly ...Arigato Ne-san ...If it wasnt for you... I dont think i could even have finished this script... Arigato... Hontoni Arigato...

3 comments:
*tears flowing out*
I'm really happy for you shian... great job! Really happy for you.. Congrats!!! Really congrats!!! aww... I really need to buy something as a reward for you.. >< sob sob.. haha xD
Congrat !! U have do it ur best... You have improve.. But you still need to go forward... =)
...A present~!!! ...Can i really have one? *Wink* ...Lol ...im so greedy... XD
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